Town Lines

It just dawned on me that here it is only Wednesday and I’ve already been in five of the six island towns.

This is unusual. West Tisbury is a no-brainer: I live in it. I do most of my grocery shopping and all of my beer buying in Oak Bluffs, and the Spirituals Choir, in which I sing, rehearses there every Wednesday. Life takes me to Vineyard Haven several times a week: buying dog food at SBS, shipping a parcel from the UPS Store, having breakfast at the Black Dog Café . . .

Besides, I’m still half convinced that I live in Vineyard Haven, or maybe that I should live there, since I’ve lived in Vineyard Haven almost half my years on Martha’s Vineyard.

The other three island towns are barely on my psychic map.

However.

Sunday morning I headed up-island because the Spirituals Choir was singing at the Chilmark Community Church, then yesterday afternoon I headed thither again because Roberta Kirn’s community sings this summer are being held at The Yard, a venue that specializes in dance — in which, I confess, I have not much interest unless I am dancing.

Today I went to Edgartown for a brown-bag lunch at the County of Dukes County Court House (yes, I really live in the County of Dukes County — hold your wisecracks about the Department of Redundancy Department because I’ve not only heard them all, I’ve inflicted them on others) with clerk-magistrate Liza Williamson, after which I observed a mediation at Small Claims Court.

I’m thinking that before Sunday I have to make the trek to the sixth island town, Aquinnah (formerly known as Gay Head and still called that on occasion), just to say that I’ve been to all six island towns in one week. Because I’m not sure that’s ever happened before.

The County of Dukes County Courthouse

The County of Dukes County Court House

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Plot

Plotting fiction is like making rock candy. Left to itself, boiled sugar water just sits there. Nothing happens. Well, yes, things happen, but they take so long that it’s a rare soul who’ll just sit there and watch.

I mostly avoid how-to-write books, but this one still comes in handy.

I mostly avoid how-to-write books, but this one still comes in handy.

Not the stuff of plot.

Day-to-day life on Martha’s Vineyard is like boiled sugar water. Things happen, but most of them unfold s-l-o-w-l-y. Even when the results are noteworthy, the steps taken to get there are mundane, quotidian, dull. Follow the newspapers for a few months if you don’t believe me.

No surprise, then, that most novels written about Martha’s Vineyard are murder mysteries. Killing someone off is like dropping a string in the sugar water. Formless liquid crystallizes around the string. Murder shakes people out of their day-to-day routines. They say and do things they wouldn’t do otherwise.

Homicides are rare here. Fiction writers are all in the alternate-reality business, especially if we write about real places, but though I’m happy to read about alternate Martha’s Vineyards where murder happens several times a year, I don’t want to create one. As a plot device, murder makes me just a little bit queasy. My fictional alternate reality is a sort of psychic map of Martha’s Vineyard. I want it to mesh with the Vineyard I (think I) live on.

Dramatic events do happen, of course. Once in a while a quiet undercurrent will explode into a headline. This spring, a loose dog jumped a fence and chased down and killed a miniature horse. An on-leave police officer obstructed the firefighters who showed up to extinguish a fire at her home. Such incidents are like strings in the sugar water, good grist for plot, but they have their own challenges. Have you ever really listened to how we recount such incidents for someone who wasn’t there?

“So Jane parked in front of her sister’s house — you know her sister, right? You met her at Cynthia’s Groundhog Day party — no, that’s her older sister; this was the younger one, Margaret — no, you don’t want to call her Peggy, that’s their mother’s name and the two of them barely speak — Is that what happened? I hadn’t heard that — this sister lives in Edgartown, back behind the gas station — yeah, there’s been some trouble there, I’m getting to that — Jane just sat in the car because there was a young guy standing there with a wool cap on even though it’s August — isn’t this heat outrageous? Yeah, I know it’s how they dress, but Jane never saw him before and he had a skateboard under one arm — really, I almost hit one last year when he came shooting into Five Corners from the post office . . .”

Every little thing that happens has at least half a dozen stories feeding into it. Trying to prune and shape these into a plot that readers can follow is, to put it mildly, a challenge.

When I started Mud of the Place, I couldn’t plot my way out of a paper bag. I learned by trial and error, and with the help of a couple of books: Plot, pictured above, and Beginnings, Middles & Ends, by sf writer Nancy Kress.

I didn’t kill anyone off in Mud, but the string I dropped into the sugar water involved a shooting that could have got someone killed. All sorts of interesting stuff crystallized around that shooting.

In Squatters’ Speakeasy the string is two archers who shoot an arrow into a real estate sign. Arrows are potentially lethal weapons, but my archers don’t have homicide in mind. No one has died.

Yet.

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Poison Ivy

Strivin' ivy

Strivin’ ivy

The undersung green in the landscape. Everyone rhapsodizes about the coming of spring, but no one rhapsodizes about poison ivy.

There’s a lot of it out there. It climbs up trees, it lurks under scrub oak and huckleberry, it even grows into bushes.

I’ve got considerable affection for this particular tree because it gets me humming the last lines from one of the greatest break-up songs ever written.

The last lines go like this:

 

You go out to the kitchen
To get somethin’ to eat
I watch you pick your bay leaves from a poison ivy tree
I got a feelin’ you’re gonna starve to death when I’m gone
Here’s a brand new dime
Now you call me if I’m wrong.

“I Got a Feelin’” was written and sung by the great Willie Tyson. If you weren’t around the women’s music scene in the 1970s and early ’80s, you’ve probably never heard of Willie Tyson. After putting out three LPs — Full Count (1974), Debutante (1977), and Willie Tyson (1979) — she left the music biz. This was before CDs, never mind iTunes and YouTube, so there are few traces of her on the World Wide Web. If you’ve had your ears open over the years, though, you might have heard one of her two best-known songs: “Witching Hour” and “Debutante.”

Partial cover of "Debutante," featuring Red Satin (left) and Willie Tyson. Photo and album design by JEB, long before Photoshop btw.

Partial cover of “Debutante,” featuring Red Satin (left) and Willie Tyson. Photo and album design by JEB, long before Photoshop btw.

“Debutante” features a southern belle and an over-the-hill cow who inadvertently get switched: the cow goes to the cotillion and the belle goes to the cattle auction. It’s a hoot. It spawned several “debutante balls” in women’s communities of the late 1970s. We knew how to have fun, and some of us really knew how to dress.

So this particular poison ivy tree is a window into the past, and a reminder of how much wonderful stuff has happened in the world that hardly anyone ever heard of — but those of us who did are probably still carrying the memories with us.

I’m determined to work some Willie Tyson lyrics into The Squatters’ Speakeasy. I’ve got at least one character who’s familiar with her work, so it is going to happen. When I took that photo of the poison ivy tree, I was humming “I Got a Feelin’” but I sure didn’t think I was going to be blogging about it.

Now I’m thinking how cool it would be if a technologically adept soul got some of Willie’s songs out on YouTube. This stuff is too good to be hiding in some of our closets and some of our heads.

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I Say It’s My Birthday

. . . because it is, for another couple of hours.

Some years I take my birthday off. This year I didn’t. I’m drowning in work. I can’t afford to take a day off — but I didn’t really want to take a day off. My late winter and spring brought several big expenses, most recently Malvina Forester’s brake work, and not enough work. So having enough work is a pretty good birthday present.

Chives

Chives

I’ve been broke enough that buying seedlings for my dinghy garden seemed like a crazy extravagance. My chives wintered over well — maybe that would be enough garden for this year?

But being swamped with work means that in another month or so there’ll be money coming in, enough that having spent 40 bucks or so for seedlings, seeds, and potting soil won’t seem extravagant at all. It might even seem chintzy.

Plus I’ve learned over the years that it’s easier to be frugal if I don’t get into cut-your-throat self-denial. Cut-your-throat self-denial is like giving up ice cream because you think it’s bad for you and then obsessing about ice cream 24/7 until you break down and eat a quart of it all at once.

So this afternoon, it being my birthday ‘n’ all, I took myself down to Vineyard Gardens and bought a bunch of seedlings, two cubic feet of potting soil, and a packet of basil seeds.

First step was the planter on my deck railing. Into it went two coleus — I love the way its colorful leaves catch the light at different times of day — and some Greek oregano. I hope I didn’t kill the Greek oregano teasing its tangled roots into two clumps.

20130608 porch box

The rest of the Greek oregano, plus parsley, basil, two cherry tomato plants, and some marigolds, went into the dinghy.

20130608 dinghyThere’s plenty of room left, at least until the basil seeds I’m going to plant tomorrow are big enough to transplant. What should I put there? More tomatoes, more basil, more flowers? Watch this space.

 

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Logistics

Thinking about “getting around,” as in “I use my car mostly to get around” and “If I didn’t have a car, how would I get around?” . . .

Malvina Forester, with Fellow Traveller living up to his name in the driver's seat

Malvina Forester, with Fellow Traveller living up to his name in the driver’s seat

By the middle of last week, the noise coming from the right side of Malvina Forester’s back end was too ominous to ignore. On Thursday I called my mechanic, and on Friday I took Malvina in. Sure enough, we had metal scraping metal on the right side and the left wasn’t much better: the rear brakes had to be relined and new rotors put in.

The parts, as usual, had to be ordered from off-island. The Patriot, one of our lifelines, carries freight, newspapers, passengers, and other stuff on a regular schedule between Falmouth and Oak Bluffs. Larry, my mechanic, got on the phone. Yes, the parts were in stock. No, the guy who usually delivers stuff to the Patriot was on vacation. Yes, a co-worker could do it, probably this afternoon but no later than Monday morning.

I’d bring Malvina back Monday morning. Larry said I shouldn’t be driving. I knew that but figured I’d be OK getting home and back to the shop on Monday morning, and to my writers’ group meeting Sunday night, which is about two miles from home.

Saturday night, however, the M.V. Spirituals Choir, in which I sing, was performing at a benefit concert at Katharine Cornell Theatre. Did I want to drive Malvina, rear brake shrieking and scraping, into Vineyard Haven and back after dark? I did not. I put the word out to fellow choristers and soon had two offers of a ride to/from.

Choirs and audience during the finale of Saturday night's concert. Think about how all those people got there and back!

Choirs and audience during the finale of Saturday night’s concert. Think about how all those people got there and back!

The woman I got a ride with was someone I barely knew. I got to know her a little better on the ride into town and back. The concert was great. You can read about it in the U.S. Slave Song Project blog, for which I am admin and chief blogger.

Monday morning I left Malvina with Larry and walked down to the Black Dog Café. There I ordered breakfast, set up Hekate O’Dell on a back table, and got to work on my current copyedit, a multi-author volume about Brazil’s relationship with the Middle East.

Email included the offer of another job from a different publisher. Contemplating the impending brake repair bill, not to mention the not-paid-off balances from the winter’s big expenses — easy chair, car battery, and four new tires — I took the job. June was going to be a busy month.

Larry doesn’t use email and I don’t have a cell phone, so I walked back up to the shop at the appointed hour to see how things were going. “Terrible,” said Larry. Well, they weren’t really terrible, but it turned out another part was needed — and had to be ordered from Falmouth. Larry delegated Jesse, one of his workers, to give me a ride home. Jesse, a very pleasant young man, gave me a ride to my front door, even though it’s half a mile down a dirt road. We talked about brakes, cars, and the challenges of living on Martha’s Vineyard.

Around 2 the next afternoon, Larry called to say that the car was ready. Should I bike into town? Should I hitch? I decided to do something different: catch the Vineyard Transit Authority‘s #3 bus, which leaves the West Tisbury post office at a quarter till the hour all day long. While I was cutting through the Island Farms subdivision, a guy in a venerable pickup passed me, waved, then stopped and backed up. Did I want a ride? He was going as far as NAPA. “That’s almost exactly where I’m going,” I said, and got in.

Trav checks out the deer at the mostly deserted house.

Trav checks out the deer at the mostly deserted house.

He dropped me off at the end of the Old Holmes Hole Road. Before we got there, we’d exchanged names and speculated about the mostly deserted house whose yard Travvy and I trespass across whenever we walk to the post office.

Malvina was ready and waiting. No metal screeched and shrieked as I drove home by myself, without Travvy in the passenger seat. Cars come in handy for getting around, but you don’t meet as many people in transit or have as many interesting conversations. I didn’t even own a motor vehicle till three years after I moved to Martha’s Vineyard. I wonder if I knew more back then.

 

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May License Plate Report

Sing hey for May! Only three new sightings, but two of them were of plates I never saw in all of 2012: South Dakota! New Mexico!

And Georgia, which isn’t quite so special but whose absence was leaving a rather big gap in the East Coast. There’s still a little gap where Delaware should be, but it’ll show up eventually.

The total stands at 36. That means 15 to go — I count D.C., of course, having lived there for 11 years. The eagle-eyed among you will notice that on this map Georgia is #35. That’s because I numbered both Nevada and Maryland #26. The nod goes to Nevada; Maryland is now #27 and Georgia #36.

2013 may license plate

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Cross/Walk

screamSo around 4:15 this afternoon Travvy and I were waiting to cross State Road to go to the West Tisbury post office — waiting at the crosswalk, mind you — and a nice person in an older white Subaru Outback stopped to let us go.

As we stepped into the crosswalk, I turned to wave at the driver. The black sedan behind the Outback was pulling up on the grass between the road and the bike path/sidewalk. I swear, this person was trying to pass the stopped car.

Summer’s here, folks.

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Benefit Art Show

After reading The Mud of the Place a friend told me, “I’ve never met any of these people, but I feel like I could run into any of them in the grocery store.”

Maybe my favorite compliment ever, not least because it captures so perfectly the weirdness of writing fiction about a place that really exists. Mind you, the place that really exists, exists differently for each one of us — I blogged about this in “My Martha’s Vineyard” — but when you add fictional realities to the mix, your head will start spinning if you think too hard.

Cynthia Riggs‘s mystery novels are all set on Martha’s Vineyard, but you know it’s not the real Martha’s Vineyard because on the real Martha’s Vineyard murder is rare and each of Cynthia’s books features at least one body dead by murder most foul. Other than that, however, her Martha’s Vineyard is so drop-dead authentic that her fictional sleuth, Victoria Trumbull, is actually the title character of a guidebook — Victoria Trumbull’s Martha’s Vineyard — that will take you to some real places and won’t get you lost.

Confused yet?

My aim is to tell some truths about Martha’s Vineyard by making things up, but the things I make up have got to be plausible. Several of the Mud characters go to Makonikey. You can go there too, but you won’t see what they see. I modeled the Martha’s Vineyard Chronicle office on that of the Martha’s Vineyard Times, but I gave the building an extra story, and no Chronicle staffer ever worked for the Times.

sign 2In The Squatters’ Speakeasy a nonexistent organization called the Friends of Affordable Housing (FAH) sponsors a benefit art show and sale at the Ag Hall on Memorial Day weekend. The Ag Hall really exists, as does Memorial Day weekend, but I stole the art show idea from the (real) Friends of Family Planning, whose 25th annual art show and sale was this weekend. Since I just finished drafting a chapter about the preview party that opens FAH’s art show, I decided to head down to the Ag Hall to see what the real (?) thing looked like.

foyerLate on a rainy Saturday afternoon, the foyer was quiet. In my chapter, a lavish buffet bisects the room from back to front. There’s a cash bar in the rear left corner, an affordable housing display in the near right, and an artist with big paintings and a bigger ego just downstage from the bar. Yes, I could see it. I could see it all. It works.

In my version, a band is playing and people get up and dance. No one was playing or dancing yesterday afternoon, but look what I found in the middle of the dance floor.

dancers

wall

Several of my characters have artwork in the FAH show. I didn’t see Shannon’s barn painting, or Giles’s arrow series, or Mama Segredo’s watercolors, but I did find the wall they hang on.

I paid particular attention to prices. Were mine reasonable? For the most part, yes. At $150, however, the ticket price for my preview party was too high. I’ll probably bring it down to $75 or even $50, which is what Friends of Family Planning’s tickets cost.

The Friends of Family Planning show features the winning posters in a contest for students at the Martha’s Vineyard Regional High School. What a great idea. My Friends of Affordable Housing might have to steal it.

hall My art show, I decided, needs more ceramics, more jewelry, and more fabric art. Oh yeah, and a few of those white benches.

mugsI had no intention of buying anything, of course, until my eye lit on Deborah Hale’s ceramics, particularly two mugs with a lovely sea-green and blue glaze. The price was much too reasonable, so of course I bought them — and drank my tea out of one of them this morning.

Don’t be surprised if they wind up in the novel.

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Tripod in the Backseat

One of the most important lessons I’ve learned as a fiction writer came from a theater director. “Make interesting choices,” he said.

What’s an interesting choice? One that opens up possibilities. Watch a good improvisational theater troupe at work. Its skits work because each actor instinctively makes choices that trigger interesting responses from the other actors. Ho-hum choices lead to two-dimensional characters playing out flat scenes. Boring choices lead to dead ends.

Writing has plenty in common with improv, especially in the early-draft stage. Often I don’t realize I’ve made a ho-hum choice. I may not realize that I’ve made a choice at all. For instance –

A chartreuse Neo-Bug rolled up the driveway of the mansion where Bluesman Luke, one of my main characters, is the caretaker. The lady of the house had called en route, so he was expecting her. Both the color and the make of the car surprised him, however, and he surmised from the luggage in the backseat that she intended to stay for a while, although her husband wasn’t with her. When she rolled down the window, a mop-headed dog rose from her lap and put its paws on the door.

Not bad for the lady’s first appearance, but when I kept writing the dog took up too much of my attention and the scene drifted into shallow water and got stuck.

Scenes often unstick themselves, but Squatters’ Speakeasy as a whole was stuck. As I blogged earlier this month, I had an opening scene and a good idea but the thing wasn’t going anywhere.

It came to me, probably when Travvy and I were out walking, that I should take a closer look in the backseat of that car. So I reviewed the previous scene in that chapter, in which Bluesman Luke, recovering from a hangover, is trying to coax a tune out of one of his guitars. Once again the lady calls from the far side of the Bourne Bridge to say she’s on her way. Once again the startlingly chartreuse VW rolls up the drive.

This time, however, Luke notices a tripod in the backseat. Oh, the lady explains, she’s been taking photography courses at the Museum School.

Where did the tripod come from? Did the mop-headed dog turn into a tripod? I don’t know, but at that moment the author’s character sketch turned into a character.

self-photo

Blogger photographs self.

A few days later she appears at a late-night blues jam at Luke’s cottage, packing two cameras and the tripod. Pretty soon she’s persuaded Luke to attend an event he desperately wanted to avoid but where I needed him to show up. (More about that later.)

As I watched the lady — whose name is currently Elinor Madsen, though that may change — make things happen with her camera, it dawned on me that some of the other Squatters characters had to be carrying cameras. Several of them are visual artists, after all, and hell, even I — not a visual artist — am reasonably adept with both a point-and-shoot and a camcorder.

Cameras are everywhere. More, their presence expands the possibilities wherever they show up, whether the occasion is private or public, ordinary or extraordinary. Private parties become public when a partygoer posts photos on Facebook or uploads a video to YouTube. Bystanders catch public officials and police officers in acts they would rather keep secret, and it’s no longer “your word against mine” but “your word against my pictures.”

Blogger photographs self but forgets to turn flash off.

Blogger photographs self but forgets to turn flash off.

I’ve long been fascinated by what we see, what we don’t see, the myriad ways we see what we want to see and don’t see what we don’t want to see or might not be able to handle. Martha’s Vineyard, like any tourist destination, is a theme park where some people make their living creating illusions for other people to see, and the other people believe (some to greater, some to lesser degrees) that what they’re seeing is true.

As I blogged the other day in “Reality,” tourism is reality TV’s first cousin. Maybe we’re all tourists in each other’s lives?

I, however, didn’t have a clue what this had to do with Squatters’ Speakeasy until that tripod appeared in the backseat of Elinor Madsen’s chartreuse VW. What better tools to explore the themes I’ve long been obsessed with than cameras, camcorders, and YouTube videos?

Thank you, subconscious. I owe you another one.

 

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Green Green

The unfolding of spring this year has been unusually entrancing, or maybe it’s just that I’ve been more-than-usually entranced. In winter, I packed my little Canon PowerShot on late-afternoon walks when the gathering clouds promised a vivid sunset. These days I pack it on Trav’s and my morning walks just to see what new wonders spring has revealed.

I’m not sure I see more when I’ve got my camera along, but what I see seems more wondrous. Here’s some of what’s going on in my neighborhood these days.

green undergrowth

Along the driveway

In winter, green brambles and moss catch the eye. Now they’re shouted down by leafing-out huckleberry bushes, blueberry bushes, and all sorts of undergrowth. The oak foliage above is still a-borning.

Pretty soon the oak pollen will be turning the cars yellow-green and making some of us sneeze.

Pretty soon the oak pollen will be turning the cars yellow-green and making some of us sneeze.

Fledgling scrub oak leaves are startlingly red.

Fledgling scrub oak leaves are startlingly red.

Camera in hand, I notice raindrops on green leaves. It hasn’t rained much lately, but it rained Sunday night. This was taken on a still-overcast Monday morning.

wet leavesThe pines are green all year-round, but spring greens them in new ways.

Baby pine cones -- is Mama Tree giving me the finger?

Baby pine cones — is Mama Tree giving me the finger?

The pines are two-tone while they're putting out new growth.

The evergreens are two-tone while they’re putting out new growth.

Green and gray play together. From a distance it’s same old same-old. Up close it’s fascinating.

green and grayI’m told that green has more shades than any other color. How many of them are in this photo?

shades of green 2

This recently plowed field is Travvy’s favorite vole-pouncing ground. You can’t pounce on green. If you miss the vole at first pounce, then you can dig for it. travvy watches

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